Thursday, October 1, 2009
Descriptive Prompt.
I woke up to the smell of bacon,I looked to see what time it was,it was around eight. It was very sunny out-side,the kind of sunny that you look out the window&you can barely open your eyes because it hurts. I Got up from my bed,walked to the kitchen&found my dad making breakfast so it was Sunday he didn't work that day,from that moment I knew my brother,sister&I where gonna have to clean our room's I just thought what a drag,I don't wanna do anything today. I noticed my sister&brother where all ready awake watching TV in the living room,I sat on the couch just waiting for my dad to say "Go do your beds,who's gonna take a shower first,come set the table,come do this come do that" but he never spoke,the only words I heard form him where "breakfasts ready come eat." I went to the bathroom&washed my hands as so did my siblings,once we where done we headed to the table to eat our food. My dad was waiting for us,he just smiled&ate,he latter broke the silence,he got up from his chair&spoke "I need to tell you guys something very important" I questioned myself what could it be,nothing good I guessed because he had a serious look on his face. My brother answered "What happened?" A tear fell from my dads face&their I new it was not gonna be something good. "Well," My dad started,"Am not gonna be around anymore I did a mistake&your mom..." He trailed off,more tears came down his face. I started crying,what was going on what did he mean by a mistake,was he gonna go away? "Am sorry guys." I heard my dad say,"Am sorry." I couldn't stop crying,my dad was the best&now he was gonna go away,I know I sometimes wished he wasn't my dad but once I heard those words,Am not gonna be around anymore I did a mistake. Those words killed me,I turned to look at my brother&sister they were crying as well,what seemed to be a sunny Sunday now seemed to be a rainy&cloudy one.
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omgg ur story alomost made burst some tears mann..lol well anyways gessh it touuched my heart dwed..its bery good good job nice detials and u used goood emotions i loved ittt :D hehe the only thnig u did bad was u didnt add that u brushed ur teethed whn u woke up..but anyways besided that lol its a wonder picee rock on dwed!!!
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